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'fresh Spring'

fresh spring cascading down exposed skin awakened invigorating my senses water Contest name: "Wow me in five lines" 20/04/2011 HM

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/26/2011 8:15:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Wilma in Francine's contest. Love, Carol

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 4/25/2011 1:33:00 PM

Absolutely Beautiful!!!!!!! the form the feeling and the Poet... Love Michael

Jack Horne

Date: 4/24/2011 8:49:00 AM

many congrats : )

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/24/2011 8:16:00 AM

Cinquains are hard to capture .... you have done this beautifully!! Congratulations, Wilma!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/24/2011 12:16:00 AM

congratulations, Wilma. I'm so tired now my eyes are crossing, but I think I have two more to see and I'm outta here!!!

John Freeman

Date: 4/23/2011 9:58:00 PM

Great to see you in the winner's circle Wilma. Congratulations on your honored place. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/23/2011 9:22:00 PM

Congrats Wilma on your HM in Francine's contest ..wowing her with these great words ... enjoy your honor as u celebrate the joy of Easter Sunday luv..

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/23/2011 7:28:00 PM

Very pretty lines Wilma. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Francine Roberts

Date: 4/23/2011 6:25:00 PM

congrats Wilma on your HM in the contest with this wonderful cinquain

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/21/2011 5:51:00 PM

I'm gonna wow! you 5 times.. wow! wow! wow! wow! wow! love it... p.d.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/21/2011 6:00:00 AM

Reads like a winning wow...Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/21/2011 12:17:00 AM

I am being wowed by so many poems using the word spring, I can see myself easily not making a spot in this contest! This one has GOT to get a place. YOu did wonderfully, wilma.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/20/2011 6:05:00 PM

Lovely feelings under those waters, Wilma

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/20/2011 1:29:00 PM

whoo, wilmsy... a splendid romp od a piece for spring.. i did a cinquain too! great vibes, huh?.. best winning wishes to yuo!! :) huggs, nette

James Foulk

Date: 4/20/2011 12:32:00 PM

you wowed me in five lines, this was great, such writing, so creative, really enjoyed it. thank you for commenting on Sweet Erika and she has not seen it yet, but hope to give her a copy this weekend.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/20/2011 10:39:00 AM

Wow! It must be wonderful to feel those fresh water drops beneath a waterfall, Wilma. Super entry for Francine's contest. Sending winning wishes your way! Love, Carolyn

Desiree M

Date: 4/20/2011 9:51:00 AM

Very nicely crafted. Love it

Kash Poet

Date: 4/20/2011 7:35:00 AM

Another little gem from you Wilma!Best wishes.Visit my SECRET poem:)

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/20/2011 7:21:00 AM

beautiful !!!! I felt refreshed!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/20/2011 6:39:00 AM

How utterly refreshing Wilma.. good luck int he contest ..nice use of spring.. I also used the water reference .. we both luv water ..how cool.. wishing u a lovely ..blessed..and Happy Easter my friend...