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Fresh Refreshed Light

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Fresh Refreshed Light

The dawn comes each day
Barefoot outside my window
With fresh refreshed light

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  1. Date: 11/17/2011 6:23:00 PM
    It's so... well, Fresh! Loved it. :) It makes me think of running barefoot outside before the sun is all the way up. The air is so clean, feels amazing. You should try it sometime.

  1. Date: 11/11/2011 8:39:00 AM
    Interesting use of metaphor; the dawn as 'barefoot' is a great image, but Line 2 could also mean someone standing barefoot. At least I read it both ways. I also liked the 'fresh refreshed' usage. Thanks.

  1. Date: 11/11/2011 7:48:00 AM
    Beautiful haiku Dr Mehta.It is very nice to think Dawn comes barefooted.Enjoyed.