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Freedom's Journey

...it seems so long ago, but it hasn't happened yet. a moment to remember, a moment to forget... It started on its journey some uncounted years ago. Learned to fight, yes to survive, and damned the river's flow. Unwanted as a baby, mistreated as it grew. Standing on the outside, see sadness, paint it blue. One day it watched a mirror and the mirror watched it back. All alone in such a crowd, a mirror painted black. ...yes, it died a while ago, but I still hear its cries. A moment to remember, for the mirror never lies... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This is one of the first poems I wrote. (Too many moons ago to mention) I am not sure why I sat down to write, but felt so good to write it out I have been doing it ever since

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Date: 9/7/2010 4:41:00 PM
our early work deserves appreciation, thank you for sharing it with us.
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Date: 9/5/2010 2:06:00 AM
Excellent write. you need to post the others as well. Welcome to the soup
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Date: 9/4/2010 5:31:00 PM
i enjoyed reading this poem and i believe in giving honest feedback...i think you did great and u chose ur words wisely..i enjoyed it and i hope to read more from you..keep up the great work...
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Date: 9/4/2010 4:37:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your very creative write tonight... soup offers many contests...check them out and enter.. and good luck with luv.. safe holiday..
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Date: 9/4/2010 12:58:00 PM
Glad that you shared some of your therapy writes..It does help to put it all down in written form..It seems to clear one's mind and straighten out their thoughts..Sara
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