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Freedom's Call

For my country, right or wrong. Respect her flag and sing her song. Earn my right to breathe free air. Evoke God's blessing with earnest prayer. Defend the weak against evil force. Open a path to honorable recourse. Made a pledge and this I swore: Serve her well in peace and war. Call on brothers to join our cause. Assist each other without pause. Love my country and give my all. Lay down my life at freedom's call. July 18, 2015

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Date: 7/24/2015 11:53:00 PM
you do very well with acrostic form, Janece. I see this was a winner. Big congrats to you on a well deserved win. And thanks so much for your comment on my poem.
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Date: 7/24/2015 9:11:00 AM
Awesome write, Janece. This is what makes America great. Enjoyed reading. God Bless, Avis
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Date: 7/23/2015 8:51:00 AM
Fantastic write from the soldier's point of view! The rhyming just made it better! Congrats on your placement in my contest, Janece! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/23/2015 2:48:00 AM
great acrostic - many congrats Janece:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/23/2015 1:49:00 AM
Congrats on ur winning awesome write Janece ! Great powerful acrostic!
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Date: 7/23/2015 12:35:00 AM
Janece, congratulations on your win. Awesome Acrostic. Love SKAT
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