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We often find a shade under a tree, but sometimes it is the trees that seek a shade under our hands. 

In the shade of our hands great trees rest And in the midst of our circle many forests hide Seeking relief from scorching greed And the strong foul winds of menacing commerce. Thickly they grow nourished by storms, The storms of our words and deeds That night and day stand with them. The sweet birds sing to them About an old tree now long gone That one day woke to the terrors of a blade. Valiantly did she stand her ground Defending her right to be a tree for a while: Not sawdust, not plywood, not firewood-- Just a happy green tree for a good while. "Freedom for Tree-doms!" she cried out that day To rouse trees and men alike Against the terror of the cold steel blade. But not a man, not a tree, rushed to her side So alone she stood to fight her battle. Alas, all she had for missiles were her pretty leaves, Which in vain she hurled with a swing of her boughs To drive the harsh blade from her mighty limbs. Above the forest a little bird watched her struggle end As with flailing boughs she drowned In the sea of green below To lie quiet on the forest floor. On her soft fallen leaves that night Poachers crept while the world slept And bore her away to humming mills In a town far from the birds that wept.

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Date: 4/26/2017 4:59:00 AM
If you listen you can hear the trees speak and you can hear them weep when injured or cut down. Your poem is most beautiful Agona! Congratulations on having it featured. 7 ; ) Aloha, Connie
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Date: 5/8/2017 6:02:00 AM
Delighted to see you drop in, Connie! The trees indeed have voice and tears, perceptible to minds that care. Thanks for the 7!
Date: 4/25/2017 6:51:00 AM
VERY EDUCATIVE THE POEM IS TEACHING US NOT TO CUT DOWN TREES TEACHES US TO PLANT TREES VERY BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN
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Date: 5/8/2017 6:15:00 AM
Thanks Abdul! The tress stand with us in the battle to make our world eternally beautiful
Date: 2/16/2016 7:48:00 PM
Amazing and well penned, Agona, it's a deep write... LINDA
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Agona Apell
Date: 2/18/2016 8:29:00 AM
Thanks Linda!
Date: 11/7/2015 8:30:00 PM
amazing imagery, deep write. SKAT
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Agona Apell
Date: 11/8/2015 3:46:00 AM
SKAT, it's good to see you drop in. Thanks for the compliment!
Date: 11/7/2015 8:01:00 PM
wow, this had such great imagery. I really enjoyed this poem showing such compassion for our wonderful trees.
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Agona Apell
Date: 11/8/2015 3:43:00 AM
Thanks Andrea! The trees are one of us.

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