Freedom

Finding strength to break free from former sins and strife feeling burdens lifted forgetting past bondage focused on the future fully living new life following the Savior. Written on 9/23/2016 Pleiades

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/1/2016 2:12:00 PM

This one is excellent just excellent. A Fav!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/27/2016 8:55:00 AM

We both chose similar themes:) well written, Laura:) congratulations on your win:) I admire your faith:)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/27/2016 3:13:00 AM

- Congratulations Laura, on your great wins poems - I do not participate often in contest, but this I like very much - A challenge like a puzzle .... not easy ... but Pleiades poems is a wonderful form - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Quigley

Date: 9/26/2016 9:04:00 PM

Nicely done! Like the shape too!

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/27/2016 12:03:00 AM

Thank you, Tom :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/26/2016 5:27:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Laura:-) hugs jan xx

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/27/2016 12:03:00 AM

Thank you, Jan :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/26/2016 5:06:00 PM

Laura, this is a beautiful testimony of faith! Well written with smooth flowing lines that show what real freedom is. Congrats on your 3rd place win! Love, Kim

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/27/2016 12:02:00 AM

Thank you so much, Kim! I'm thrilled with my placement and I do love to write poetry about our Lord! Thank you :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/26/2016 11:54:00 AM

Fabulous Laura - beautifully uplifting:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/24/2016 12:11:00 PM

- Beautifully written, love especially the first line Laura - Good luck in the contest - I wish you a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/24/2016 11:55:00 PM

Thank you, Anne Lise! I'm glad you liked my poem :)