Free Will

Angels and demons Watch, as nature takes revenge- Well deserved: they laugh. A. Green *Take it as you wish- The demons and angels laughing, or the demons and nature laughing...???? Up for the reader to decide.

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Mac Mcgovern

Date: 5/12/2010 6:25:00 PM

Hi Amy, I read your poem as a vision of what we are experiencing today. The apparent increase in global disaster as natures response to mans continual distruction and obvious lack of concern. If we continue on present course, maybe the Angels and Demons will be all that is left to laugh. Great write.

Robert Valentine

Date: 5/12/2010 5:34:00 AM

Very clever :) Another piece directed at individual perception! I shall be reading more of your work when I come online :)

Kim Hilliker

Date: 5/1/2010 9:33:00 PM

I like it! Good luck in the contest.