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Free To Dance!

Like a diamond, sparkling so bright Just out of reach, want to grab on tight. Admiration and desire grow in my heart Little did I realize it would tear me apart. The grass looked greener, thought it would be sweet Forbidden fruit—nothing but deceit. “No one will know; no one will be hurt.” It’s a lie! Don’t even flirt. My eyes were opened before it was too late Thank you for saving me from a terrible fate. I see the one before me with whom I am one There’s no one else for me under the sun. I’m happy, content, at total peace Love, rediscovered, will never cease. So thank you, Lord for a second chance I’m free as a bird; once again I can dance!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/4/2010 12:04:00 PM
I loved it However, I felt that you were straining to rhyme....Otherwise it was great- Angel LeeAnn
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Date: 6/4/2010 9:11:00 AM
So enjoyed reading your creative write today .. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/4/2010 6:54:00 AM
This is a great way to start my morning reading poetry. I am glad your poetry was among the poetry I have the pleasure to read today. Wishing you a weekend full of love and inspiration Michele. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/3/2010 12:13:00 PM
what a hopeful write,, dance what your givin,,, life :)
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