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Free Soul

" Free Soul " She was just a fifteen year old girl her life was starting to grow her average life as many teens they think it all they know. She was not ready for this world some things she has to learn a worried parent sitting alone for them now they yearn. Her little girl is growing up she went with friends this night she drank some beer then was drugged slowly loosing her sight. It happened without a warning this 19 year old boy would have a try she lay there without motion she could not even cry. She could not say a single word not even the word stop her eyes began to open she saw him there on top. she felt him pumping into her she could not even scream she closed her eyes and thought real hard this has to be a dream. She felt him getting rigid then she heard him sigh the drug that she was given would not even let her cry. She felt him climbing off he left her there and bare she looked around the room for the friends she thought were there. She knew that she was raped she still had no control she tried to move and yell out but no place could she go. Of her he took advantage he ruined this young girls life turned her life upside down and filled her life with strife. A hurting fifteen year old girl her life was starting to grow her average life changed as many teens she really didn’t know. She took her life that night she did not want to live heaven bound as a Free Soul she had two lives to give... Penned By MPK NOTE: This poem was created with the hopes that more parents become involved in their childrens lives and activities. Too many young people have no sound direction towards their future and too many adults set very poor examples for them to follow...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 3/5/2009 5:02:00 PM
This happens all too often. Girls are not taught how to defend themselfs. I know this girl couldn't, I couldn't at 19, but your right if parents had said "look if you drink or do drugs this could happen" for me it would have helped I think. And self defense classes for girls should be a must. Light & Love
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Date: 10/28/2008 10:17:00 AM
Its a terrible thing that this actually happens, as I was reading this poem I felt like I was in the girl's shoes, feeling what she felt. Amazing!!
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Date: 7/10/2008 11:38:00 AM
A Triple 7 for this one. More and more of this is happening all the time. I pray God's protection over youngpeople here and everywhere. Great write. Need to be shared in the schools.
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Date: 7/10/2008 11:04:00 AM
Mickey here here I wish all parents would get involved sad poem but true to whats happeing today! Thank you for your comments on my poetry! Kindly Laura :)
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