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Free People Are Brothers

Free people are brothers With swords of steel and wars now fought Along this path of endless weave We travel lone of lessons taught And faith which led us to believe That all is lost shan’t be the truth For as we stand in unity Our blood and scars to offer proof Now here as one we shall be free Shown pride and strength this foe does fall In scattered breaths and lonely screams On battlefields, sad echoes call ‘Cross crimson tides, unholy streams This tyranny fuels flaming wrath To burn the weak, the innocent Though time does come the aftermath A fate of armies long since spent When now we stand on mountains high Come hear our voices, steady roar As morning sun does wake the sky We bring an end to this, your war For here inscribed on sharpened blade A motto cast for all to see As brothers we have all been made As people, ever to be free 1/10/17 Written for The Swords Speak - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Julia Ward

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Date: 2/7/2017 10:15:00 PM
Enjoyed. ..was an interesting contest. .I'm still trying to interpret the rules sometimes :) congrats
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Chris Green
Date: 2/8/2017 9:51:00 AM
Thanks so very much Donna.
Date: 2/7/2017 6:23:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Chris... such an amazing poem!!! Beautifully writen, my friend - loved it!
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Chris Green
Date: 2/8/2017 9:51:00 AM
Thank you so very much Claudia
Date: 2/7/2017 3:01:00 AM
A very good poem, much enjoyed by me, Chris. Thanks for entering it and well done. :)
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Julia Ward
Date: 2/7/2017 8:32:00 AM
Your thrill is my thrill. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 2/7/2017 8:20:00 AM
Thank you Julia, I am thrilled you liked this one. It was my pleasure to enter your contest, your theme was inspiring.
Date: 1/11/2017 7:04:00 PM
Me like this poem, Chris. Me like it very much. Your pen sparkles in a different zone. Your poetic skill set has depths untapped, yet to be shown. But this poem is a prophetic taste of things to come. Great poem, structure and message. You are full of surprises, my friend. Keep the love and knowledge flowing. Love and joy to you always.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/26/2017 1:56:00 PM
Thank you so much my friend. I must have missed this comment and for that I am sorry. I appreciate your kindness always Freddie.
Date: 1/11/2017 8:44:00 AM
Yes, freedom bears a cost. Yet, pay it, we must. A great write, Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/11/2017 10:07:00 AM
Thanks so very much Cona. Just going with the theme of the contest.
Date: 1/10/2017 3:35:00 PM
So much wisdom in your words here..Freedom and brotherhood...Go hand in hand indeed.Our ancestors shed blood for freedom to be like sisters and brothers again..I just wish the people in power of our countries will always keep it this way.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/10/2017 3:59:00 PM
I agree with you my sweet friend. But, I am afraid it is just wishful thinking on our parts. But, we always have poetry so we can create any world in any situation that we want. :) Thanks so very much Charmaine. I always look forward to your kind comments.
Date: 1/10/2017 11:32:00 AM
Stirring stuff Chris, great poetry :)
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Chris Green
Date: 1/10/2017 11:55:00 AM
Thanks so very much Gary.

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