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SIX TO FIVE AT FIVE TO SIX SIX TO FIVE AT FIVE TO SIX How quickly “i couldn't love you any more” becomes “I couldn't love you anymore” because love is supposed to be beautiful and exciting it should be an easy flight and never a chore and doesn't include words such as “arguing”, “threatening” and/or “fighting “i couldn't love you any more” I remember reciting those words when they were true then you called me a bastard and I called you a bore until “i couldn't love you anymore” took precedence due to you love was never meant to become dull or droll laughter should greet the sun and a smile at night should bid it adieu love should never be a contest or a matter of power and control while each dawn should find forever a love which feels brand new “i couldn't love you any more” means I love you as deeply as love ever grows love should make one feel joyous, jovial and spry “i couldn't love you anymore” brings a one act play called love to a close six words turns into five and that urges one to cry © copy write 2012....PHREEPOETREE ~free cee!~

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Date: 7/22/2012 9:46:00 AM
Jeffry, firstly I love this, it is very clever the way you change the perception simply by adding a space, altering the whole meaning of the poem, secondly many thanks for your kind comments, I appreciate your talent, and boy you are talented, write on my friend....David
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