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Teach and study, cook and clean Write a poem in between All the chores and daily life Perfect Mom, half decent wife Work and work and dream and dream Scrub the tub in shower stream Want to travel here and there But I’m stuck and full of care Write and write, and feel the sting Hope tomorrow joy will bring Gulp down well my happy pill Looking for that awesome thrill Hit my head against the wall Scream in pain, then take a fall Try to keep life going right Need a stick of dynamite Mundane, weary, chore filled day Want my hips to dance and sway Feel like I will suffocate Every grade will get in late Cook and cook and scream and scream In the soup, dollop of cream Morning light, I check my phone Off to work, I give a groan Frazzled, frazzled, what’s the deal? Dazzled’s how I want to feel Thought I looked so sexy sweet but he wants an OVEN treat Write a verse to keep me sane Post a poem, deaden pain Live a life of make believe Passion fashion in my weave So I read another write P Soup’s, Yum Yum, a delight Frumpy, Grumpy Passion Queen Just don’t check behind the screen!!! Eileen I’m frustrated. I have grades to give in, a thesis to finish, a trip to plan….and I can’t be BOTHERED!!!!!!!!!! Sympathy People!!!

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Date: 2/9/2015 11:38:00 AM
Lol!!! This i really did enjoy! Not your unfortunate circumstances but the poem itself. Excellent fun! :) john.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/9/2015 11:42:00 AM
Thanks ever so much, John. Glad I gave you a laugh. Grades are in...One a bit of a break. New semester starts after tomorrow. Still working on the Thesis...All in good time. :)
Date: 1/28/2015 3:10:00 PM
Have another look at my last poem, I have made a number if changes. Hopefully I have made it better.
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Date: 1/28/2015 2:27:00 PM
We've all been there, Eileen...hang in there. Love that line...perfect mom half decent wife...I feel that way most days. I guess the kids get the best of us most days and poor hubbies get the left overs...LOL. Sounds like a vacation would do you good! Hugs, Rhonda
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/28/2015 2:32:00 PM
Hi, Rhonda...Glad to have you here, my dear. Yes...I do think at times the kids get the better deal...Had to be honest on that one...and even then, I'm in no way a perfect mom. Perfectly devoted...Yes! I have grace till Monday for the grades so.....Tomorrow I'll do the lion's share. Thanks for the visit. HUGS
Date: 1/28/2015 8:11:00 AM
You have captured the mood in a very entertaining way. It sounds like you have a lot on your plate. This too shall pass! P.s. I don't think you could ever be frumpy.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/28/2015 2:32:00 PM
YOU ARE AMAZING! Yes, I'm referring to that PS at the end. Hugs
Date: 1/27/2015 8:42:00 PM
Humdrum can drive you a bit homocidal
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/27/2015 11:12:00 PM
homicidal....hmmmm...got to give that one some thought. Thanks for dropping by.
Date: 1/27/2015 8:35:00 PM
An awesome dose of hectic levity Eileen...you excel at multitasking...a multitalented Queen..."Need a stick of dynamite..." that can can go so many ways! I like your playful exhaustion...J.A.B.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/27/2015 11:11:00 PM
Oh Justin.....you alone would see that. Yes...even that way....it's all good, Hon.... :) Multitalented Queen....Isn't that a phenomenal thing to say....HUGS
Date: 1/27/2015 1:20:00 PM
Even frazzled your words do dazzle! My mother used to say "no rest for the weary!" "half decent wife" . . . "hips to sway" . . I am rolling!! Buck up Little One, you have miles to go .. . but here is a hug for you to draw energy from!! I know you can do it . . . mighty is the Queen of Passion!! Frumpy . . . that is so rich!! 7 much love, light and laughter . . .
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/27/2015 1:27:00 PM
:) Forget the hug....come help me tabulate scores! ;) HA HA! I'm grumpy alright. My family is hiding!! Meeting tomorrow...day after grades in...Hubby wants to whisk me off to Cyprus...I want to stay to finish my Thesis so I can defend it and get that damned MA degree and on to the Ph.D. Poetry is addictive, David...I can't stay away...HELP ME!!! Ok...I've vented. I'll take that hug now....XO
Date: 1/27/2015 1:15:00 PM
Sorry i forgot, a 7 and into my favourites. love Shane xxx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/27/2015 1:28:00 PM
Well...that sure makes me LESS grumpy! Thanks, Shane!!! Hugs
Date: 1/27/2015 1:14:00 PM
a great write, just the perfect way to start my day with a giggle. Love the final stanza it just makes the poem. And you do have my sympathy as i also have these days more often that not "FRAZZLED" "and can't be BOTHERED!!!!" Truly fantastic. Thanks Eileen The gift of laughter is worth more than gold.
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Shane Cooper
Date: 1/27/2015 1:36:00 PM
I am interested in reading if you get the time to find the names. If they are half as good as your steamy poems i'll be spending the day doubled over in laughter. Ciao "Grumpy" love Shane xxx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/27/2015 1:30:00 PM
I don't usually do funny, but I have a few limericks and rants here. OH OH OH...you should read the rants about men. I have a few good ones...Too frazzled to remember titles now, but if you're interested...will look it up in the morning. I have 18 Argument Essays to correct, and final tests to grade. grrrrrrrr....This was a stress reliever. Thanks for the visit. :)
Date: 1/27/2015 12:49:00 PM
I feel your pain!!!! Frazzled today? You ask....Heck, I'm frazzled everyday. Wife, mom of two teenagers...need I say anymore? LOL I loved this poem and I'm still giggling...Fantastic write Eileen! :))) Ana
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/27/2015 1:31:00 PM
I only have one 20 year old, but she's a handful!!! ;) No, just kidding...she's a cutie pie, but she thought this write was a laugh. Thinks I have the martyrdom complex. Won't help the grading, though. She's TIRED! ;) Oh dear...Glad I gave you a giggle. Will be by to visit you soon. Hugs

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