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fragments of light

 
hidden beneath clouds lambent light of moon flickers through silence within cimmerian shade of night lambent light of moon glows atop the crested waves a ship's guidance flickers through silence a lighthouse beacon abandoned years ago within cimmerian shade of night when the moon is dormant keepers of past light ships way
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  1. Date: 11/6/2013 5:43:00 PM
    A very interesting and captivating poem! I also enjoyed the visuals within it's lines. Fantastic work, Sandra!...Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my work. I really appreciate it! :)

  1. Date: 11/5/2013 1:20:00 PM
    intresting chocie of words love the verses xd avidscott

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 7:47:00 PM
    A word I did not know...thoughtful, apt usage. And one I love, 'lambent' is so evocative of the mood you create. Wistful, haunting words and welcome. Mark

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 11/2/2013 8:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Mark :) hugs
  1. Date: 11/2/2013 4:29:00 PM
    Oh, wow.....I love this......"Cimmerian shade of night"....what a lovely description this is!

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 11/2/2013 7:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Carrie ...hope your weekend is good... hugs :)
  1. Date: 11/1/2013 12:42:00 AM
    "Beautiful poem and thanks for your comment"

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 11/2/2013 7:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much :) hugs
  1. Date: 10/31/2013 4:19:00 PM
    wonderful and visual...

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 11/2/2013 7:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Harry... hope you evening is pleasant :) hugs
  1. Date: 10/31/2013 2:05:00 PM
    Hi Sandra, Truly beautiful write from you! Ken

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 11/2/2013 7:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much Ken...have a great weekend...hugs :)
  1. Date: 10/30/2013 8:25:00 PM
    I can really picture the lighthouses out on the ocean in the distance flickering... you do paint a stunning picture :)

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 10/30/2013 8:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Karen...your comments are always so uplifting :) hugs
  1. Date: 10/30/2013 7:27:00 PM
    Cimmerian shade.... Stunning! A beautiful work of art; reflecting a beautiful soul.

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 10/30/2013 7:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Sarai...nice to meet you :) hugs
  1. Date: 10/30/2013 1:12:00 PM
    This piece made me picture friends at the top of an abandoned lighthouse one clear night. You can hear their laughter and goblets toasting from a distance. It's very beautiful.

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 10/30/2013 7:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Jake...i love the ocean and my other half collected lighthouses long ago, so we have many of them in out home...not sure if they inspired my muse but it was a fun write :) hugs
  1. Date: 10/30/2013 9:23:00 AM
    Good Morning Sandra. Thanks for your visit.

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 10/30/2013 7:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hiya Richard :)
  1. Date: 10/30/2013 12:17:00 AM
    Sandy, you write with the hand of an artist. Just lovely!

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 10/30/2013 7:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    wow thanks for your sweet reply to my poem Conne...hugs :)
  1. Date: 10/29/2013 4:16:00 PM
    beautiful write

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 10/29/2013 7:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Jack....hugs
  1. Date: 10/29/2013 2:39:00 PM
    Lovely! Light & Love

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 10/29/2013 7:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Debbie....hugs :)
  1. Date: 10/29/2013 2:33:00 PM
    A beautiful picture you paint my dear Sandra... kudos xoxox

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 10/29/2013 7:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much Jack....hugs :)
  1. Date: 10/29/2013 12:07:00 PM
    Cloud,night and moon are the lives for many poets.You paint a charm shadow with them here...Loved it and thanks for passing by my poems

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 10/29/2013 7:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    what a sweet thing to say...thank you :) hugs
  1. Date: 10/29/2013 10:01:00 AM
    Even your titles are poems on their own. Another gem in your crown.

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 10/29/2013 7:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much Richard...your comments always bring me a smile...hugs :)
  1. Date: 10/29/2013 6:40:00 AM
    this paints a picture Sandra beautiful pen ty for visiting my page Shadow x smile

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 10/29/2013 9:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Shadow....hugs :)
  1. Date: 10/28/2013 11:42:00 PM
    I so admire how u worded this moonlit poem, kudos for an enchanting poem. I love grandiloquent words in my poetry. Thanx 4 leting me know of d win, or i'd neva know, being new here.:)

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 10/29/2013 9:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you...it was a fun write :)
  1. Date: 10/28/2013 10:36:00 PM
    well crafted write......I like the cascading lines...best wishes

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 10/29/2013 9:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Joseph :)
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