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Fragments of Light

hidden beneath clouds lambent light of moon flickers through silence within cimmerian shade of night lambent light of moon glows atop the crested waves a ship's guidance flickers through silence a lighthouse beacon abandoned years ago within cimmerian shade of night when the moon is dormant keepers of past light ships way trimeric

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 11/6/2013 5:43:00 PM

A very interesting and captivating poem! I also enjoyed the visuals within it's lines. Fantastic work, Sandra!...Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my work. I really appreciate it! :)

David Scott

Date: 11/5/2013 1:20:00 PM

intresting chocie of words love the verses xd avidscott

Mark Peterson

Date: 11/2/2013 7:47:00 PM

A word I did not know...thoughtful, apt usage. And one I love, 'lambent' is so evocative of the mood you create. Wistful, haunting words and welcome. Mark

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/2/2013 8:37:00 PM

Thank you so much Mark :) hugs

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/2/2013 4:29:00 PM

Oh, wow.....I love this......"Cimmerian shade of night"....what a lovely description this is!

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/2/2013 7:24:00 PM

Thank you Carrie ...hope your weekend is good... hugs :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/31/2013 4:19:00 PM

wonderful and visual...

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/2/2013 7:23:00 PM

Thank you Harry... hope you evening is pleasant :) hugs

Ken Carroll

Date: 10/31/2013 2:05:00 PM

Hi Sandra, Truly beautiful write from you! Ken

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/2/2013 7:23:00 PM

thank you so much Ken...have a great weekend...hugs :)

Karen Anglesey

Date: 10/30/2013 8:25:00 PM

I can really picture the lighthouses out on the ocean in the distance flickering... you do paint a stunning picture :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/30/2013 8:32:00 PM

Thank you Karen...your comments are always so uplifting :) hugs

Sarai Virden

Date: 10/30/2013 7:27:00 PM

Cimmerian shade.... Stunning! A beautiful work of art; reflecting a beautiful soul.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/30/2013 7:51:00 PM

Thank you so much Sarai...nice to meet you :) hugs

Jake Ponce

Date: 10/30/2013 1:12:00 PM

This piece made me picture friends at the top of an abandoned lighthouse one clear night. You can hear their laughter and goblets toasting from a distance. It's very beautiful.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/30/2013 7:50:00 PM

Thank you Jake...i love the ocean and my other half collected lighthouses long ago, so we have many of them in out home...not sure if they inspired my muse but it was a fun write :) hugs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/30/2013 9:23:00 AM

Good Morning Sandra. Thanks for your visit.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/30/2013 7:48:00 PM

Hiya Richard :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/30/2013 12:17:00 AM

Sandy, you write with the hand of an artist. Just lovely!

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/30/2013 7:49:00 PM

wow thanks for your sweet reply to my poem Conne...hugs :)

Jack Horne

Date: 10/29/2013 4:16:00 PM

beautiful write

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/29/2013 7:53:00 PM

Thank you Jack....hugs

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/29/2013 2:39:00 PM

Lovely! Light & Love

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/29/2013 7:52:00 PM

Thank you Debbie....hugs :)

Jack Ellison

Date: 10/29/2013 2:33:00 PM

A beautiful picture you paint my dear Sandra... kudos xoxox

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/29/2013 7:52:00 PM

Thank you very much Jack....hugs :)

Litan Dey

Date: 10/29/2013 12:07:00 PM

Cloud,night and moon are the lives for many poets.You paint a charm shadow with them here...Loved it and thanks for passing by my poems

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/29/2013 7:52:00 PM

what a sweet thing to say...thank you :) hugs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/29/2013 10:01:00 AM

Even your titles are poems on their own. Another gem in your crown.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/29/2013 7:51:00 PM

thank you so much Richard...your comments always bring me a smile...hugs :)

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 10/29/2013 6:40:00 AM

this paints a picture Sandra beautiful pen ty for visiting my page Shadow x smile

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/29/2013 9:49:00 AM

thank you Shadow....hugs :)

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 10/28/2013 11:42:00 PM

I so admire how u worded this moonlit poem, kudos for an enchanting poem. I love grandiloquent words in my poetry. Thanx 4 leting me know of d win, or i'd neva know, being new here.:)

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/29/2013 9:47:00 AM

Thank you...it was a fun write :)

Joseph May

Date: 10/28/2013 10:36:00 PM

well crafted write......I like the cascading lines...best wishes

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/29/2013 9:47:00 AM

Thank you Joseph :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/28/2013 6:29:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your creative work again ...Good use of the form..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your presence there was uplifting...Sara

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/28/2013 8:26:00 PM

thank you Sara...the form seems fairly easy to do and fun to play with...have a good night! Thanks for your visit...hugs :)

Tim Ryerson

Date: 10/28/2013 5:40:00 PM

Lambent: Softly bright or radiant...Had to look it up....You just taught me a new word my friend! You never cease to amaze...

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/28/2013 5:41:00 PM

Thank you Tim....I thought that word fitting in this piece, your comments are always so kind :) hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/28/2013 4:07:00 PM

wow, what a cool form this is. I see it's called trimeric. where did you see it? It looks familiar to me as if I saw someone blog about it maybe? Just beautiful!

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/28/2013 5:16:00 PM

my dusty memories post before this gives the details on trimerics....I found the form online when I was researching poetry forms...sometimes I like to experiment :) ...and thank you...Sara already tried one...I believe she did a rhyming one!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/28/2013 3:54:00 PM

- Sandra, this is just beautiful !!!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise ;)

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/28/2013 5:20:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise...hugs Sandy

Poet Tacito

Date: 10/28/2013 3:19:00 PM

Utterly beautiful, thru the fragments...damn.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/28/2013 5:18:00 PM

Thank you Drake...playing with that form...my dusty memories poem gives the details about the form... hugs :)