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Lush sultry scents fill my nostrils spices and exotic flowers blooms first encounter with dark people my, they were scarey like pirates Armed with enormous panga's and wickedly nasty looking knives at almost 8 years old I shook violently when one looked at me grinning gruesomely I shrank back against my mother, my haven, never had I seen such delightful sights junk boats sailing round us, their crew most motley, in a range of multi colors Waving their enormous panga's at us gold teeth gleaming, it was so scarey I was glad to sail on to Dar-es-Salaam many horrendous nightmares I then suffered Little knowing that Dar was just the same some steps I now had taken into the unknown so many fears still lay in the future and beyond a totally new yet dangerous world lay ahead of me I am describing an overnight stop at Zanzibar at my young age it was a fearful very exciting experience written 09/04/2013 contest Fragment

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Date: 9/23/2013 10:14:00 PM
lovely win. Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/24/2013 3:45:00 AM
hi and ty Skat have a great day Shadow x smile
Date: 9/20/2013 10:18:00 PM
another nice winning poem Shadow... take care...Linda
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Date: 9/21/2013 5:13:00 AM
hi Linda Ty always for your support and encouragement Shadow x smile
Date: 9/17/2013 5:43:00 AM
quite an unusual piece for the contest; I think you painted a vivid picture here of your memories; congrats on joint 4th with me! :)
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Date: 9/17/2013 9:58:00 AM
ty congrats to you also Shadow x smile
Date: 9/16/2013 11:27:00 PM
Beautiful memory Shadow - well described. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 9/17/2013 4:10:00 AM
hi and Ty Vicky for congrats and reading Shadow xsmiles
Date: 9/16/2013 4:23:00 PM
Congratulations, I am pleased to see this on the winners list so that others can appreciate this piece.
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Date: 9/17/2013 4:12:00 AM
so sweet and kind of you Richard Ty for your continued support and encouragement Shadow x smiles
Date: 9/5/2013 5:32:00 PM
A LOVELY PEACE OF WRITING LINDA MY DEAR FRIEND GRIN
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Date: 9/5/2013 5:51:00 PM
hi mate how's you? Ty Liam good to hear you enjoyed Shadow x smile
Date: 9/5/2013 5:20:00 PM
This is so cool, I was fully drawn into your tale. This is the sign of true artistry. Well done!
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Date: 9/5/2013 5:53:00 PM
wow Ty Richard dear so inspiring Shadow x smile
Date: 9/4/2013 4:37:00 PM
you tell this story well. I like it
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/4/2013 4:55:00 PM
hi PJ Ty for visiting my work and for liking it Shadow x smile

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