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Fragile Heart - Re-Entered Poem

full of promise I gave my love, responded with the flush of youth, a need to give and to receive gave my precious heart to you. in return you gave me hope, life and love I was entranced, each day brought happiness in its grasp. happy thoughts until that day, each word still rings in my ears, a light went out in my life...when you said returning your heart ...no longer required tears flow o'er my shattered hope still in pain my heart beats on penned 23/10/2016

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Date: 12/15/2016 7:34:00 AM
Excellent write but sad. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it
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Date: 12/14/2016 9:22:00 PM
So sad and tragic a write, so well expressed, well done and congrats!!!
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Date: 12/13/2016 2:09:00 PM
Seren, congratulations on your win in my contest with this lovely Acrostic, well done ~
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Date: 12/10/2016 12:33:00 AM
Beautiful Seren!
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