Fragile Heart

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"Fragile Heart"

Frantically I turn the pages tearfully with agony Reluctant to close my eyes to virtual reality Ageless love, to mend this fragile heart I plea Giving up is not a choice, please be still Inexpressible beating heart, I need your - Love to be perfect once again in the waves of sea Eternal rest of raining trees and darkness be Hold me so I won’t fall apart . It isn’t easy; a wreath I emit Every part of me that grieves, you saw to depart A fragile heart living behind as I breathe you in Relentless my heart sinks deep in twisted pain endlessly That part of peace that last forever my heart is yours 10/18/2016 Sponsored by: John Hamilton Contest Name : Fragile Hearts-Acrostic

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Richard Nnoli

Date: 11/8/2016 12:52:00 PM

This is highly emotional, deep, nice one Richard

Eve Roper
Date: 11/9/2016 12:52:00 PM

Thank you, Richard, for stopping by and reading my poem. Hugs Eve

Tatianna Leachet

Date: 11/4/2016 11:31:00 PM

So much emtion. I love it. Well done!!

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/25/2016 8:21:00 AM

Heartfelt emotion and sad imagery in your 'fragile heart' poem, Eve. Well done, and congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Sushma A. Singh

Date: 10/25/2016 6:31:00 AM

Congrats on this touching piece!

Chris Green

Date: 10/19/2016 3:46:00 PM

Such a sadly beautiful piece Eve. I thought I read and commented on this earlier, but I guess I was mistaken. So here I ma, the longing and the missing is deeply felt in your words today. I think this might be the winner in the contest.

Eve Roper
Date: 10/19/2016 6:44:00 PM

Thank you so much, Chris, a lot of these poems of course are about my hubby that I dearly love. I've almost lost him a few times so it is one of my biggest concerns to keep him alive... Hugs. Eve

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/19/2016 8:45:00 AM

such an emotive write well scribed from your bleeding pen, eve... i am touched by your fragile heart!..huggs

Eve Roper
Date: 10/19/2016 6:44:00 PM

Thank you, Nette, you are looking wonderful... Hugs Eve

White Wolf

Date: 10/18/2016 11:35:00 PM

Wow! That's really good. Loved it /|\