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Fountain of Youth

She bathed in the Fountain of Youth, and emerged without her laughter lines.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Kacey Greenlee
Date: 6/24/2011 7:52:00 AM
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I would love to happen to me.....Every girl would though lol'Thanks for your comment on my recent win. Have a great day love....
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Kacey Greenlee
Date: 6/24/2011 7:52:00 AM
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 6/10/2011 8:55:00 AM
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Very witty, Jack. My stepmother lived across the street from the real Fountain of Youth but I don't think she ever laughed. My bad. You good! Wildly funny crystalline. Love, Carolyn
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/9/2011 1:15:00 PM
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Very creative..I got a chuckle..I have had a sip from the fountain of youth but I seem to be aging..Enjoyed..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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Linda-Marie Sweetheart
Date: 6/9/2011 11:05:00 AM
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well that is good in one way but not to lose humor entirely Jack.. nicely penned luv..
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James Fraser
Date: 6/8/2011 1:22:00 PM
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Yep, I agree - very clever Jack. Top of the class with this one :)
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Wilma Neels
Date: 6/8/2011 11:06:00 AM
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So clever Jack!! Love it ;) thanks dorset the smiles tonight!!
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James Foulk
Date: 6/8/2011 10:23:00 AM
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very clever, enjoyed reading this one, sometimes i wished there was a fountain of youth, when these old bones start to ache.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/7/2011 9:01:00 PM
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This is almost profound!! Love it.
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Gwendolen Song
Date: 6/7/2011 7:29:00 PM
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How sweet...the fountain of youth..nice crystalline, Jack. A topic not written about recently on the soup! Gwendolen
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 6/7/2011 3:32:00 PM
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Lovely thought well expressed, jack
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