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Forty Days Astronomers time track a cycle of forty days Observe prayer and fasts for sacred forty days The body and spirit purify in forty days Our naming ceremony is on the fortieth day The boy is naughty as he turns forty! 8 words in all five lines January 23, 2016 Contest: Forty Sponsor: Silent One

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Date: 2/3/2016 11:39:00 PM
again, thanks for the reply
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 3/28/2016 12:13:00 PM
Thanks Linda!
Date: 1/31/2016 11:22:00 PM
Balveen, Congratulations on your win. XOXOX Linda :)
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/1/2016 3:26:00 AM
Thanks Linda!
Date: 1/28/2016 2:06:00 AM
Wonderful write Balveen ..Congrats on big win!!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/29/2016 9:44:00 PM
Many thanks Upma!
Date: 1/26/2016 2:25:00 PM
Serious and witty all in one, Balveen! Congrats on a lovely win! // paul
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/26/2016 10:18:00 PM
Thanks Paul!
Date: 1/26/2016 12:20:00 PM
BALVEEN, CONGRATS ON YOUR NICE WIN. **SKAT**
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/26/2016 10:18:00 PM
Thanks Skat!
Date: 1/26/2016 9:38:00 AM
Well expressed, congrats on your win.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/26/2016 11:38:00 AM
Thanks Richard!
Date: 1/26/2016 8:35:00 AM
Congratulations Balveen on your placement! You deserve the win! :) -Hans
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/26/2016 9:12:00 AM
Many thanks Hansteven!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/26/2016 8:41:00 AM
Many thanks Hansteven!
Date: 1/25/2016 9:37:00 PM
Well done. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/26/2016 6:19:00 AM
Thanks Joyce!
Date: 1/25/2016 8:57:00 PM
Nicely done, Balveen...cute finishing line.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/26/2016 6:22:00 AM
Thanks Lin! Love....
Date: 1/25/2016 6:00:00 PM
Great pen Balveen and I like the humour in the final line:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/26/2016 6:20:00 AM
Thanks Jan! Love!
Date: 1/25/2016 3:58:00 PM
hey, CONGRATS, my friend!!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/26/2016 6:21:00 AM
Thanks Andrea! Love.....
Date: 1/25/2016 1:25:00 PM
Nicely done, Balveen! Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/26/2016 6:23:00 AM
Thanks Sandra! Love....
Date: 1/25/2016 8:49:00 AM
Belveen, I like all your reasons why forty is meaningful, well done ~
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/26/2016 6:24:00 AM
I appreciate your appreciation!Thanks Constance! Love
Date: 1/24/2016 12:24:00 PM
hey, I like how you did it. Kind of like me, focusing on the significance of that awesome number.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/26/2016 6:24:00 AM
Thanks dear! Love....
Date: 1/24/2016 2:40:00 AM
Well defined poem. Good luck.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/26/2016 6:25:00 AM
Thanks Archna! Love....

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