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Forgotten Valentine Card

She is an old lady of 98 Living in her own time Saw the hearts of a Valentine Card Thought to herself where is mine With puzzled frown upon her face An old memory floated by Of a time and a place Plus a card with angels that fly She is remembering the handsome lad Dark curly hair and dimpled smile Who vowed undying love to her Married her in grand style Those memories have faded Gone are the days of love But nestled in an old tin box Is the card she was dreaming of. Penned 1/2/2013 Contest: Forgotten Valentine

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Date: 2/20/2013 12:18:00 AM
Belated congratulations on your win. I enjoyed the poem again.
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Date: 2/15/2013 11:10:00 AM
Very touching write... Congratulations on the win!
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Date: 2/15/2013 3:15:00 AM
Hey Star, big congrats on this win of yours...David
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/15/2013 4:33:00 AM
Dafydd thanks for the congrats ....Seren
Date: 2/14/2013 8:39:00 PM
Happy Valentine's Day to you,,,just in case you've been forgotten! RAY
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/15/2013 4:33:00 AM
awww i had been thx Ray...Seren
Date: 2/12/2013 2:07:00 AM
hi there big congratulations on your top spot and so well deserved xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/12/2013 1:29:00 PM
Thanks Mandy....Seren
Date: 2/11/2013 9:08:00 PM
Hello Seren, a nice little win in the contest..PD
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/12/2013 1:30:00 PM
Yes it was Linda ....Seren
Date: 2/11/2013 5:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. The theme is a great deal like mine. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/11/2013 5:59:00 PM
Thank you for your congratulations...Great minds think alike Joyce...Seren
Date: 2/11/2013 5:10:00 PM
'seren, I had not seen your forgotten valentine poem yet and your comment to me sent me to see what YOU wrote. SO nice. Exactly fitting to that theme of forgotten Valentine. A big congrats to you, Dearie.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/11/2013 5:57:00 PM
oops i clicked wrong one sorry Andrea
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/11/2013 5:56:00 PM
Hi Debbie thank you
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/11/2013 5:55:00 PM
Thank you Andrea...Seren
Date: 2/11/2013 3:13:00 PM
Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/11/2013 5:56:00 PM
Hi Debbie Thank you
Date: 2/11/2013 2:58:00 PM
This is so endearing, Seren! Congratulations!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/11/2013 5:57:00 PM
thank you Carrie
Date: 2/11/2013 12:28:00 PM
Well now I know who wrote this...Congratulations on your 1st place win and for supporting my contest. Excellent poem!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/14/2013 8:03:00 AM
thanks Debra might be calling on your help in a day or so i have to judge mine this is my second one lol put memory in to backtrack and hope I do remember
Date: 2/2/2013 2:04:00 PM
I like this so much. Iam working on one in a similar vein..BG
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/2/2013 9:38:00 PM
Look forward to reading it...Seren
Date: 2/2/2013 3:07:00 AM
I erased my comment after all, but on accident, but I said then you brits are the dunces lol, and that was a little joke. I actually lived in a place where they do the exact same, and had considered that, but saw you replied before I deleted. Anyway keep up the great work, and yes the enjoyment of the writing is almost always the most important part.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/3/2013 1:01:00 PM
Just enjoy, but say when you dont please...Seren
Date: 2/1/2013 8:22:00 PM
What a great poem. Some memories never die. Good luck in the contest. I'm sure with this one you will do great.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/2/2013 2:19:00 AM
I enjoyed writing it so thats the important part. Thanks for commenting ...Seren
Date: 2/1/2013 6:38:00 PM
This is very sweet, lovely how you weaved this story. Thanks for commenting on my lost Valentine poem
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/1/2013 8:20:00 PM
Thank you Richard was my pleasure....Seren
Date: 2/1/2013 2:20:00 PM
This is such a sweet poem my friend! I really enjoyed reading this fine write this afternoon! What a tremendous piece, Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/1/2013 6:10:00 PM
Thanks Russell. Glad you liked it ....Seren

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