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Forgotten Valentine

Two-Fourteen is just another date, It doesn't mean a thing. It's been so long since valentines Could make my young heart sing. There'll be no greeting in my mail, No sweet note with my name. I brush away a silent tear Remembering love's game. I open up my treasure box And once again go through These memories of the long ago When love was fresh and new. There on the very top I find The card I'm looking for, From the sweet boy with laughing eyes, With message to adore. I put it back into the box With another wistful tear. There it will stay for twelve long months, Forgotten for a year. Written: 2/1/13 For Forgotten Valentine contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/14/2013 10:38:00 AM
Beautifully sad. It has a great emotional quality. The form and rhyme are good too. I hope this piece does good in the contest.
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Date: 2/12/2013 10:36:00 AM
Belated congratulations on your win Joyce luv xx
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Date: 2/11/2013 9:14:00 PM
Hello Joyce:-) ... Congratulations, with your awesome poem in Debra s "The Forgotten Valentine... " contest... glad to see you on the winning list. Always & Forever* PD
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Date: 2/11/2013 3:19:00 PM
Maybe we should give our gal friends Valentines? Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 2/11/2013 12:41:00 PM
So this is who wrote this gem !! Thanks for entering my contest. Appreciate the support. Congrats on your 2nd place win !!
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Date: 2/2/2013 6:02:00 PM
What a wonderful memory and the ending finishes it up so well. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 2/2/2013 8:58:00 AM
Great entry for the contest. You made me think or reminiscewhat love is or was.
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Date: 2/2/2013 8:27:00 AM
This is so sad, but a wonderful write, Joyce! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim
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