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Forgiveness

I begged For forgiveness, And God in turn Added years of peace and joy; To a life that before, Had no purpose.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 6/11/2011 12:01:00 AM
:) this one is sweet, simple, and inspiring
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Date: 6/11/2011 12:01:00 AM
this one is sweet, simple, and inspiring
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Date: 6/11/2011 12:00:00 AM
wow thats amazing! i hope to be able to write free verse that well someday! very deep emotions, i has hooked from the first word to the last syllable. very good portrayal of emotion
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Date: 6/10/2011 11:19:00 AM
CONGRATS ON BEING FEATURED THIS WEEK! THIS IS A VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM, NICELY WRITTEN. RHONDA HERO
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Date: 6/10/2011 6:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Tom. It is an honor to be on the list with you this week. May you find the inspiration to keep you writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/8/2011 12:05:00 PM
Nicely written. Happy ending. Congrats!
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Date: 6/8/2011 5:51:00 AM
A stunning write with an awesome message Tom, congratulations on your poem being featured this week :)
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Date: 6/7/2011 9:18:00 AM
My congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Tom
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