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Forget a life that will never thrive, 
a painful fight to stay alive.                     
I can't describe the pain I feel, 
I know I need some time to heal.
Will the love from my family or a friend, 
really save a life that bound to end? 
The darkness that castsover me,
shrinks the light so I can no longer see. The lack of air takes 
my last breath, 
untill I see,
the face of death. 

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  1. Date: 7/18/2012 5:17:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Carmen. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol