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Forever Your Girl

Forever your girl, long hair and eyelashes in curls.
Dazed and confused with a life time to loose. 
Too many roads, and doors to choose.
The clock is ticking, the alarm is about to go off and I can't answer it.
I never thought it would be this hard. 
All I want is the white picket fence and a great big yard.
It can go so many ways you know, left...right... 
One minute in front of you and the next it's out of sight.
Wanting the 'american dream' 
Birthday cakes and chocolate ice cream.

This was the first poem I ever wrote. 

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  1. Date: 1/25/2011 7:46:00 PM
    So enjoyed reading your creative write tonight Jennifer and appreciate your sweet comment on my poetry which just won 5th place in one of the contests.. I urge u to enter our contests to have your poetry read more frequently and also getting noticed luv... luv the flow of your Rhyme.. my fav form..

  1. Date: 1/25/2011 4:53:00 AM
    You have made a pretty good job of the first poem. The last line is delicious. And yes Jennifer I do try and curb myself from judging my daughter.

  1. Date: 1/25/2011 2:03:00 AM
    Jennifer, sometimes the dreams are the things that keep us alive.. Great write ;) Wn