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Forever Was a Lie

When I kissed you for the first time. I shook. And when you asked why I told you it was because I loved you. When really I was just scared of the idea that you loved me. When I kissed you for the last time. I shook. And when you asked why I told you it was because I loved you. When really I was just scared of the idea that you hated me.

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Date: 8/6/2014 2:34:00 PM
Short, sweet and simple. Message is clear but could be expounded upon to add more interest and flavor. Possibilities for a great poet are there but just need some more polishing up which young ladies and women are good at doing. Hope this isn't to thought provoking. Jim Horn
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