Forever

War Holy Or mundane Between our gods Or over our oil It squanders countless lives So blinded by confidence Our self righteousness continues To send the young to their early graves Evermore it shall go, giving no peace.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/3/2010 10:19:00 AM

From the poetry I have been reading today I can see the weekend handed out a lot of inspiration. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and wish you continued inspiration thank you for sharing Hunter. Love, Carol

Hunter Ware

Date: 5/2/2010 12:57:00 PM

If you would, please don't post scripture in a comment for one of my poem's. It makes me uncomfortable as I'm not a Christian. I mean no disrespect, and I sincerely appreciate you reading my poem.

Susan Palli

Date: 5/2/2010 11:09:00 AM

Looking forward to eternal peace. (Psalm 46:9)