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Forbidden Valley

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Forbidden Valley

Forbidden valley

Twin peaks arousing passion

Tulips on the tips

Copyright © Terry O'Leary

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  1. Date: 9/28/2013 7:33:00 PM
    Passion indeed...word play can be a very interesting thing :)

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 3:14:00 PM
    Very nicely written, well done....Peter

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 3:18:00 PM
    love this clever haiku, Terry. Hope you're having a great day

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 10:29:00 AM
    After reading some of your very lengthy pieces, I was surprised to see you dabbling in haiku. This one was very intriguing. The place you described sounds mesmerizing simply because it's forbidden. I can't help, but think that this is euphemism for something else entirely... not a place, but a woman ;) The mind is a mysterious thing...

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 3:22:00 AM
    Thinking of bee's.

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 12:39:00 PM
    I love the haiku's Terry ;}

  1. Date: 12/21/2012 10:32:00 PM
    Terry, stopping by with my warmest thoughts~ my best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 6:56:00 AM
    the mind boggles Terry...excellent haiku.

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 6:40:00 PM
    All I can do is :o)

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 1:17:00 PM
    Good erotica here - enjoyed! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anishnp5s

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 12:38:00 PM
    enjoying this one again - love it : )

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 6:05:00 PM
    Irisistible seduction that teases unmercifully!

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 5:07:00 AM
    good image terry, i admire it, forbidden but it got all beautiful things

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 1:02:00 AM
    Truly words of venery, great work. Read;{>

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 3:52:00 PM
    nice word play...very sexy

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 12:17:00 PM
    Well oh well.....oh well, a Koo koo Peek 'a boo Haiku, Terry?:) Okay, I behave...nicely done! Mikki

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 11:44:00 AM
    great images Terry, great write. Rollo

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 11:16:00 AM
    one of the best I've seen so far in this contest!!! Metaphor is wonderful

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 6:12:00 AM
    Somewhat discreet..Great work..Reads like a winner to me..Sara

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 6:21:00 PM
    Makes me want to take up mountain climbing. Well done.