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For the One Who Does Not Follow His Steps

a calm presence falls swirling clouds part in dismay judgement day arrives a book of my life, revealed.... left behind in tears of guilt...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/5/2010 8:56:00 PM
It's a wonderful entry. Good luck if it is for the contest.
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Date: 8/5/2010 8:43:00 PM
No, I am not Bess, rick. I would NEVER have a damn spider for a pet. hahaha.(that's why she deserved to get bit!!)
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Date: 8/5/2010 8:04:00 PM
wow, it looks like you did CATIE'S contest with a TANKA here. Awesome, RIck. It seems that a tanka is like an extended haiku in its form! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/5/2010 7:52:00 PM
Fantastic words Rick.. the truth is so evident in your Tanka lines... this is wonderful for the Left Behind contest and the 2012 one as well..good luck my friend..with luv..
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Date: 8/5/2010 1:03:00 PM
Great entry Rick, all the best.. wilma
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Date: 8/5/2010 12:07:00 PM
Lovely , I love the second line. soup mail..BG
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Date: 8/5/2010 11:25:00 AM
awesome write, good luck in the contest
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Date: 8/5/2010 10:49:00 AM
hey Rick! Keep up the good writes!
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