Get Your Premium Membership

For Every Heave

The river floats, carrying me away from nights, out to the sky, where leaves are tossed, as whispers grow… retracing hours, when memoirs beckon. And sparrows fling above me now my breathing grace enshrined in stone… among the lanes and endless roads this calling mild, so warmly dear. I touch the flame of quiet stars , and long for all that's safe and warm from what I know is mine to keep; with four seasons bringing me home to drift, drift on with every heave… O knowing not when time will end upon my faith my thoughts relieved… the drink of music, a love complete Graceful the crest of my new land, unto its bed , new morns will speak about all my wild and gentle dreams… till the moon inscribes my name, while all but a soul is laid to rest. Any Poem written in August NOT for a contest Sponsor:Broken Wings 8/30/2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/14/2015 12:55:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your win, SKAT
Login to Reply
Date: 9/12/2015 9:48:00 AM
Hi Nette! I will not comment on the technical aspect of this form as I have never written one, but I will surely compliment you on the excellent content that touches my soul! Congratulations on a most worthy win! Hugs // paul
Login to Reply
Date: 9/11/2015 8:58:00 PM
A beautiful, surreal write, Nette! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Login to Reply
Date: 9/11/2015 2:32:00 PM
Beautifully penned Nette many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Login to Reply
Date: 8/30/2015 4:32:00 PM
Hmm.. I sense a similar vein of receptivity and feelings acceptance here as in 'eventuate' thanks for reading Nette..'
Login to Reply
Date: 8/30/2015 8:09:00 AM
- Impressive ..... a wonderful poem, Nette !!! - I wish you good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Date: 8/30/2015 7:52:00 AM
Excellent. Very well penned. Enjoyed reading it. TFS
Login to Reply
Date: 8/30/2015 5:42:00 AM
Captivating and majestic writing that explores the depth of the soul. A seven , good luck dear , Nette!
Login to Reply
Date: 8/29/2015 11:41:00 PM
Beautiful poem Nette!Enjoyed the read.Best wishes.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/29/2015 10:52:00 PM
Nice, pretty write! Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Login to Reply
Date: 8/29/2015 8:28:00 PM
Hi nette: a Beautifully depicted poem of sailing and I hope this isn't your last poem.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/29/2015 7:09:00 PM
The flow of this writ describe the beauty within, I love your subject and how is was constructed. A lovely and intriguing piece..........A.M.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/29/2015 2:18:00 PM
You have a very sensitive, glowing spirit. I only wish I could create a stirring piece like this one. A touching masterpiece " with four seasons bringing me home! Whew!
Login to Reply
Date: 8/29/2015 2:01:00 PM
Gorgeous, Puts me in mind of Psalm 8. ;)
Login to Reply
Date: 8/29/2015 1:25:00 PM
wow. .. beautifully exit, exquisite pen!
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things