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For, Fore, Four

He waits and listens, for the word ”Fore” Steals the balls as they land One two three four Now he can juggle, that’s what he wanted them for The little four striped grass mouse, what a metaphor!

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/30/2012 11:59:00 AM

Sorry so late but I am here now to say congratulations on your win in this contest Seren. Love, Carol

Seren Roberts
Date: 11/30/2012 2:48:00 PM

You playing catch up Carol. No problem a comment is received smilingly no matter how much delay....Seren

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/23/2012 6:00:00 PM

Seren, congratulations with your win in Debbie's contest~ PD

Seren Roberts
Date: 11/23/2012 6:38:00 PM

Thank you P.D. ................Seren

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 11/23/2012 6:39:00 AM

lovely poem my friend Seren. I like it. congratulations on your win :)

Seren Roberts
Date: 11/23/2012 1:22:00 PM

thank you Maria ....Seren

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 11/23/2012 5:29:00 AM

Lovely take on the theme Seren - love the image of the juggler. Congrats on your win!

Seren Roberts
Date: 11/23/2012 1:22:00 PM

Thanks Vicky ...Seren

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/23/2012 3:21:00 AM

Big congrats girl nice to see you again getting a winning place xx

Seren Roberts
Date: 11/23/2012 3:49:00 AM

thanks Mandy, didnt we do well....Seren

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/11/2012 9:15:00 AM

Ha ha ha....., wonderful metaphor enjoyed. Loved always, bl

Seren Roberts
Date: 11/14/2012 11:27:00 PM

Thanks bl

Joann Grisetti

Date: 11/10/2012 8:16:00 AM

Such a cute little poem.

Seren Roberts
Date: 11/10/2012 9:46:00 AM

Joann, when they ask me for something other than rhyme its a hit and miss for me. As I havent a clue.... Thanks for your comment....Seren