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Follow the Laughter

This should be a sad place There are no playgrounds, schools One tap for an intire village Their toys are rocks and sticks There is a skinny goat running beside them I hear laughter such sweet laughter running jumping squeals of delight bright smiles beaming So much unadulterated joy chasing shadows on dusty ground The slapping of bare feet No Nike's or Air Jordans to aid their flight Happiness in a place where none should exist This should be a happy place Playgrounds, schools A bathroom for almost every room in the house No need to share more than enough Toys, computers, smartphones Lonely dog sits in corner chewing his bone Children texting Tired from all their programs What if they don't get into the right schools? Futures planned Present planned to the last remaining second Fast tracked to depression Don't dissapoint Mom and Dad Best coaches, best teachers, best clothes Anything they desire Listen, listen Where is the laughter Who else is part of their tribe who cares if you live or die Sadness in a place where none should exist We think we are the fortunate ones Still where is the laughter beyond the painted smiles

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/27/2014 3:24:00 PM
It is true, you can't buy laughter and joy, it comes from the person, not the social status. well thought comparison poetry Richard, I love how your mind sees so many different perspectives it's inspiring
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/27/2014 8:26:00 PM
Thanks again Casarah, it seems we have that quality in common.
Date: 11/11/2012 10:18:00 AM
a beautiful poem
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/11/2012 11:04:00 AM
Thanks Vesna
Date: 11/10/2012 11:35:00 PM
Whoa Richard! The start of your poem is a reflection of many places where I live. "Sadness is a place where none should exist" - that should be the world's motto. ps, thanks for your comments on my 'rant', you made me smile.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/11/2012 8:30:00 AM
You didn't comment on my spelling mistake???
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/11/2012 8:05:00 AM
Glad I could make you smile. Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts, I look forward to learning more from you and about you.
Date: 11/10/2012 5:17:00 PM
Richard, I'm not a sadness monster.. I'm one who follows laughter,, even at my age.. Sometimes having everything does not cut it... love the ending thought..always~ pd
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/10/2012 5:21:00 PM
I would never think that about you, I can only see light when it comes to your spirit lovely Linda.

Book: Shattered Sighs