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Flying High

Flying High I yearn to spread my wings and fly, a fearless eagle soaring high. To be free like the wind and sing, finding beauty in everything. Like white clouds, I seek the blue sky! The form is Spanish Quintain or Quintilla: Rhyme scheme: a, a, b, b, a Iambic Tetrameter 8 syllables per line

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Toni Orban

Date: 12/11/2015 3:57:00 PM

Nice form simple sweet and direct lifts the spirits!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/12/2015 8:16:00 PM

Thank you dear Toni for your kind words and kind support for my work! Have a great weekend! Pandita

Eric Boddie

Date: 8/20/2015 9:28:00 AM

flying high is a Beautiful thing....natures Beauty with Spiritual Bling....Life without worries, only comfort and care....that sounds like Heaven, I Want To Live There....;)

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/20/2015 10:40:00 AM

I always enjoy your lovely poetic responses! I even have recurring dreams of flying through the universe passed stars and planets and I feel an incredible sense of euphoria that I wish I could hold on to during my waking hours:-) Oh well - back to earth - back to reality:-) Have a beautiful day, Eric! Pandita

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/22/2015 9:54:00 PM

Fly high, enjoy the blue of God and sky. Lovely form , great poem.. A7

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/24/2015 8:56:00 PM

Dear Robert, you're so sweet for leaving me this lovely compliment and high grade. Thank you kindly, my friend! Pandita

Skat A

Date: 7/21/2015 1:13:00 AM

Pandita, thank you for sharing your wings. :) To see so much beauty in everything. Love it Love SKAT

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/21/2015 7:22:00 AM

Awwww! SKAT A, many thanks for your kind words and continued support of my work! Warmest regards. Pandita

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/13/2015 4:03:00 PM

oh YES, this is really cool. It is a bit like the one I did for that contest of Nette's (only that one is not rhymed) WE both wish to fly!!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/15/2015 8:38:00 AM

Thank you so very much, Andie! Yes, we both share the love of freedom and flight! I read your piece and it's really a winning beauty! Pandita

Kika Ayala

Date: 7/11/2015 12:03:00 AM

Lovely, Pandita! It makes me feel like doing the same! This is a 7 from me. Have a nice evening. Kika

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/11/2015 12:24:00 AM

Thank you dear Kika for your kind words and always kind support for my work! Have a great weekend! Pandita

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 7/10/2015 3:25:00 AM

Great rhyme structure, wonderful lifting words. Nice write.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/10/2015 9:55:00 AM

Hi Scott, thank you so very much for your wonderful support and sweet compliments! Warmest regards. Pandita

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/6/2015 9:06:00 PM

I love the way you fly, Nicely done! :)

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/6/2015 9:30:00 PM

My dear Casarah, thank you so much for stopping by and leaving such a lovely compliment! Warnest regards. Pandita

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/6/2015 8:31:00 PM

Pandita, l see you flying really high. Your well written piece allowed the reader to park take of the journey with you. Excellent job.:-) Alexis

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/6/2015 10:39:00 PM

Hi Alexis, thanks very much for stopping by and sharing your thoughts on this piece! I really appreciate your compliments - helped to make my day:-)! Pandita

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/6/2015 12:32:00 PM

Soar high little eagle! May you always find that warm wind beneath your wings...this is beautiful in its brevity, Pandita. hugs!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/6/2015 4:14:00 PM

Awwww! Many thanks, dear Kim, for your kind words and continued support of my work! Warmest regards. Pandita

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/6/2015 11:15:00 AM

this is beautiful and very visual,,,

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/6/2015 4:13:00 PM

Hi Harry, thank you so much for visiting and leaving your wonderful compliments! Warmest regards. Pandita

Milton Robertson

Date: 7/6/2015 7:06:00 AM

I get a feeling of total freedom. Beautifully Done Pandita. God Bless.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/6/2015 4:12:00 PM

Yes, you are so right it's about feeling free! Thank you, my friend, for your kind compliments! All the best. Pandita