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Flying High

Black velvet feathers Flying high in Azure Skies Song of Freedom Sings (for Raul's contest)

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Date: 4/11/2010 5:48:00 AM

Steven, many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest >> James

Date: 4/10/2010 4:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your win...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my write..Sara

Date: 4/9/2010 9:02:00 PM

Well, congrats on YOUR win too, Steven. I particularly liked your first line of this one! They did look shiny soft! Luv, andrea

Date: 4/9/2010 12:57:00 PM

Black Velvet feathers - that's lovely, Congrats on your win

Date: 4/9/2010 11:00:00 AM

Steven, congratulations on your placement in my contest...Raul

Date: 4/8/2010 5:30:00 PM

Well done, Steven! I like this one!! ~

Date: 4/8/2010 4:59:00 PM

Good use of imagery in the first two lines. Interesting perception in the last. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing. Karen

Date: 4/8/2010 4:39:00 PM

My husband would love to have a mossburg (gun) or 5. enjoyed reading your poems. :)

Date: 4/8/2010 2:32:00 PM

Nice one ! good luck