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Flying Dreams

COPYRIGHT- POETESS- mrs . anjali denandee,MOM ……………………………………………………… FLYING-DREAMS …………………….. my silver-colour-kite…….. it’s weight is too-light…….. it is shining by the too-bright………. noon’s sun-light………. it reaches too-high……… on the sky-colour-sky…….. it likes to fly and fly……………….. the joy of free-air………… of it ,I take care………… but , it moves , with the thinking of don’t care………… it has many dreams………… but not like me………at sleeping-times……….. at night , I do not move , at that times……… I watch the dreams…………. but it watches the dreams , at day……….at moving-times…………. when I hold it’s string………… then i recite the rhymes……… and also , I sing the songs , I sing and sing…………………. it hears and hears………. and reaches too- higher –position………. with great-emotion……………….. then it’s speed becomes too-high………. and very-fast , it reaches too-high ……… towards the free-open - sky…………. I feel too-happiness in my own mind then…………. with joy of my own-kite ……… from my eyes tears come down then…………… for it’s upper-position…………….too-high…………. when , the dusk comes……..then the sun-light…………. it is not so-bright………………. in the own-nests ………… the birds come back ,again…………. who went too-high……. too-far from their own-nests……………… at the dawn…………………..when the sun-light… it was not so bright………………. on the west – sky…… the sun takes it’s position…………….. I pull-down it , then………………… after some times ,it touches my hand……… then , I hold it , with great-emotion………………. and say , ‘ tomorrow , you shall fly , again……’ ………………. then we return in our own – house with grand-success……. grand……….grand….grand…… like the birds-nests ………… it is also our ultimate-address………………….. then we both take rest………….. also on the sky of west……. the success-sun takes rest…………….. but now our position is lowest……… in the close – house , not the open-high-sky…………………….. but here also fly and fly….. our tomorrow’s dreams…………in our hidden-minds……then…….. yes , these dreams also fly and fly tomorrow , again…………… yes my kite and I am………..DE………… we love to dreams……..O K ………O K……. at night and also at day……………….. yiiye……yiiye……..…yiiye……………. we are yesterday……..today…..and tomorrow………… next………next….next……….also………….. ………………………………………………………………………………

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Date: 3/26/2016 3:03:00 AM
ANJALI DENANDEE, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/24/2016 10:36:00 PM
Anjali, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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