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Below is the poem entitled Flying which was written by poet Annelien Lourens. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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The ultimate thrill,
Up and down,
Up and under,
The clouds my companions.

I play in the sky,
Big twirling loops,
The wide blue sky comforts me,
My salvation.

In the sky I’m free,
In the sky I’m me,
The sky’s my playground,
I’m glad I found.

My endless inspiration,
Clouds of perspiration,
O how I wish I’ll never leave,
And lose this place.

I spread my wings out wide,
And fly in the endless blue,
I love it here,
Here I’m free to be me.

Leave Earths bonds behind,
Gravity can’t rule me no more,
The ultimate thrill,
Leave Earth behind.

Copyright © Annelien Lourens

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  1. Date: 5/18/2010 11:09:00 AM
    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Annelien. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/18/2010 6:25:00 AM
    Fine fantasy with good rhyming