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Fly My Way:

For if my love did come to stay, In shadows across an empty sky, I would then light up the way, So she could land nearby. Have faith must I in my wishing well, And flood it with coins every sunny day, And hope shall I in a magical spell, Upon shores one day we both shall lay. An ocean then may bring us in, As seagulls fly above our rest, We'll find our peace, we shall begin, And watch the sunset in the west. /|\

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/28/2017 2:31:00 AM
That's nice, no doubt it was for someone special. great write. regards, Craig
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White Wolf
Date: 4/28/2017 2:42:00 AM
G'day Craig! I live the life of a monk! Haha, so, not for anyone in particular. Thanks for your gracious visit today /|\
Date: 12/7/2016 2:26:00 PM
Beautiful romanticism, Rick. A sparkling poem w/lots of enduring love sprinkled throughout. A very serene, blissful feeling comes upon me when I read this poem. Nice write. Love always, my poetic friend.
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Date: 12/4/2016 10:39:00 PM
This is so romantic, especially that last stanza .. enjoyed
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White Wolf
Date: 12/4/2016 10:42:00 PM
That's very nice of you to say so /|\
Date: 12/4/2016 8:39:00 PM
Enjoyed your beautiful and romantic poem Rick!~Che :)
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White Wolf
Date: 12/4/2016 9:22:00 PM
Thank you, Cheryl /|\
Date: 12/4/2016 4:21:00 PM
this is pretty, Rick. and romantic as well. Nice and dreamy.
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White Wolf
Date: 12/4/2016 9:23:00 PM
Thank you very much /|\
Date: 12/3/2016 7:24:00 PM
Hi Rick, WoW! What romantic lines. I enjoyed this from start to finish. This write transported to me to a wishing well, I found myself throwing coins and wishing as well. Well done. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
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White Wolf
Date: 12/4/2016 9:23:00 PM
Thanks for that great comment /|\
Date: 12/3/2016 11:52:00 AM
Who wouldn't reply to such a romantic call dear, Rick! Beautifully written! Words that fill the heart with longing!
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White Wolf
Date: 12/4/2016 9:25:00 PM
Thanks, Demetrios /|\
Date: 12/3/2016 2:49:00 AM
It's like a lyric, I can even hear music to go with it, I love it :)
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White Wolf
Date: 12/3/2016 7:16:00 AM
Thanks, Darren, I am more a musician than a poet so yes that makes sense! /|\
Date: 12/2/2016 11:39:00 PM
Lovely longing - such touching imagery has me wishing and dreaming along with the poem ... CayCay
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/3/2016 8:18:00 AM
That's exactly how it should be, in my humble opinion. I like reading that you think so, too!
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White Wolf
Date: 12/2/2016 11:48:00 PM
Thank you! And I will snoop on if that's OK with you! I don't leave comments on all that I read, just the ones that strike me! /|\

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