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Fly In His Soup

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Fly In His Soup

Clyde found a fly floundering in his soup

   This discovery threw him for a loop

      He summoned the maitre d'

         And that pompous ass, said he

           "Don't worry! He'll die if he eats that goop!"

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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  1. Date: 10/25/2012 4:03:00 PM
    Thanks for the laugh. Great limy.

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 3:30:00 PM
    haha! don't know where that soup's been. You might enjoy my "Fly on the Wall" poem-from its perspective.

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 9:28:00 AM
    ha! good one :)

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 6:03:00 PM
    Oh No!!! LOL Loved it.

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 9:48:00 AM
    I've been to that restaurant. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 8:19:00 AM
    So funny! ha ha ha. I love it. Thanks for sharing, Robert! hugs:) Leonora

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 8:14:00 AM
    Big cackle her my friend! LOL Good one, cheers Jack

  1. Date: 10/7/2012 3:36:00 PM
    Hahaha! it's great to read your work again- it has been a while. Keep it up!Really funny one.:) Always, Laura

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 1:03:00 PM
    VERY FUNNY! I love poems like this with a witty jab.

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 4:54:00 AM
    Is this "Clyde" the late Andy Clyde of old Columbia shorts fame? Another great write Bob.

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 4:13:00 AM
    This was really funny, enjoyed. I was looking for your poem "I Touched The Wall Today" I was unable to locate. Could you provide a little direction please.

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 12:45:00 PM
    Ha ha love it Robert, you always give me a giggle thank you xx

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 11:54:00 AM
    It's funny. You never know what you will find in the soup. Have a great day. Lucy

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 3:40:00 AM
    wow i wonder what the kitchen was like? good one, love this

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 3:06:00 PM
    hahaha. Funny one, Robert!!

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 8:48:00 AM
    you rocked me off my chair, bob... a laughing sensation though i wouldn't dare touch that sop, lol... funtastic!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 8:55:00 PM
    Bob H., i love your Limerick.. enjoyed stopping by~ ALWAYS~ PD

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 1:17:00 PM
    Love it Robert, a great Limerick and a good laugh for me today. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 1:16:00 PM :) Thanks for a good laugh Bob ...... love it. Have a wonderful afternoon. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 1:11:00 PM
    Ha ha ha, oh Robert you sure hit my funny bone with that clever write my friend! I really enjoyed this very humorous poem! This is wonderfully delightful, Great Work!!