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Listen to the wind fluttering the leaves tickling the canopy just for a lark laughter applauding every playful breeze. Lyrical notes that instinctively, please, as patches of light play tag with the dark listen to the wind fluttering the leaves. Sunbeams flicker through the branches of trees alighting briefly upon gilded bark laughter applauding every playful breeze. Sending weeping willows swaying with ease to the delight of children in the park listen to the wind fluttering the leaves. The venerable old oak groans and heaves standing all alone both noble and stark laughter applauding every playful breeze. Fairies do exist if one but believes their elfin magic giving spring its spark. Listen to the wind fluttering the leaves laughter applauding every playful breeze. (A villanelle poem) 10/13/2015

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Date: 5/14/2018 10:27:00 PM
Yes I want to believe ! Delightful poem, Emile.
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Date: 10/14/2015 4:20:00 AM
Emile nicely written. My senses became alive as I read this well crafted write. Hope you are doing well my friend.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/14/2015 10:24:00 AM
Thanks Michael, I appreciate your comments. I have had some health problems recently, so I haven't been commenting on many poems as I should, but hopefully I will be getting back to that soon. Emile.
Date: 10/13/2015 2:31:00 PM
A beautiful breeze of a poem Emile. I enjoyed.
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Date: 10/14/2015 10:26:00 AM
Thanks Tim, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 10/13/2015 2:14:00 PM
you caress the page with your lilting piece, emile... so fine!.. huggs
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Date: 10/14/2015 10:26:00 AM
Thanks Nette, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 10/13/2015 1:35:00 PM
Truly inspired, thanks fo the share. DMB
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Date: 10/14/2015 10:27:00 AM
Thanks DM, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 10/13/2015 1:20:00 PM
This was terrific! I am always impressed when I read you Emile...a 7!
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Date: 10/14/2015 10:28:00 AM
Thanks so much Casarah, I truly appreciate your comments. Emile.

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