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Flowering of Spring

with accents of spring come floral drapery -- tossed where hyacinths dance in velveteen pirouette stems drip __ filling garden's view Aug 3, 2016 Contest for Rick Parise One Nature Tanka - Inspired By My Short Poem

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Date: 8/5/2016 12:16:00 AM
I like to sway with you. Congrats, Carly!
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Date: 8/4/2016 10:09:00 PM
Hi Carly, Congratulations on your winning write: -)Alexis
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Date: 8/4/2016 5:44:00 PM
Very pretty tanka, Carly! Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 8/4/2016 5:30:00 PM
yours is so pretty. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 8/2/2016 3:27:00 PM
"come floral drapery -- tossed" beautiful imagery...loved that line. Lovely piece of work, just lovely.
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