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Flower

I picked a flower it was yellow smooth shiny and beautiful so satisifed with simplicity yet complex long tall and fresh until I pulled off a petal it made me happy but then I heard it crying

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/26/2012 4:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning placement in Joe Flach's "Twisted Minds" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/25/2012 5:26:00 PM
Very creative write here Carrie both in the content and the presentation. The personification of a crying flower removing the happiness of having picked it is simply brilliant. Thanks for entering my contest and congratulations on your H<. Joe
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