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Below is the poem entitled Floating which was written by poet Crystal Wilkins. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I sit in a coffee shop but I'm not there, not really
To the faces around me its just an empty chair, empty
The world is large but it's me alone, just me
One individual, always standing alone

I am closed off, the world is not there, not for me
voice talk to me, hold no meaning for me, none
My mind is my prison, my life just for me
I am a walking corpse, with no place in the sun, no none

Nobody can reach me, I am trapped under ice, alone
Family and friends are no longer here, they are gone, just gone
No life, no stress, no pressure, nothing
Through life, though I have none, I am floating

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  1. Date: 12/27/2010 10:06:00 PM
    I really like this one, Crystal. It's got great atmosphere! I think just how a lonely person might feel. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 12/27/2010 1:54:00 PM
    Nice feelings of floating mind you have penned in this write, Crystal

  1. Date: 12/27/2010 1:02:00 PM
    put on a smile and talk to somebody. T. S.