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Flirtatious Sun

Sun flickered 'pon your eyes scintillating as the seas, dappled with the chemistry of a thousand swooning moons

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Date: 10/7/2016 9:54:00 PM

This offers beautiful imagery here. "A thousand swooning moons", very nice touch as it ties in with the sun. Nice work! MC

Paloma P
Date: 10/8/2016 7:33:00 AM

Thanks again, much appreciated!

Date: 10/7/2016 1:26:00 PM

Sigh, oops can guys sigh? Well too late, this was definitely sigh worthy. Beautiful Paloma

Paloma P
Date: 10/7/2016 1:52:00 PM

Most definitely, shows your softer side, which is absolutely necessary for poets. :)

Date: 10/7/2016 1:11:00 PM

Boyfriend, husband, or maybe just a fantasy? I like your style, Paloma:)

Paloma P
Date: 10/7/2016 1:51:00 PM

All three. ;) Thanks, and i'm kidding, I don't have the energy! :)