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Flickering Iris

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Below is the poem entitled Flickering Iris which was written by poet Seeyam Brjmohun. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Flickering Iris

sharp splinters of white 
lightning harvest in raindrops
flash within my eyes

This is for Raul's "Shards of Light" contest.

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  1. Date: 4/9/2010 4:13:00 PM
    Love the title! Good use of imagery for a creative view. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for stopping by to comment on my poem. Have a good weekend. Karen

  1. Date: 4/9/2010 3:24:00 PM
    Seeyam~ I love this piece I hope you do well in the contest! Laura :)

  1. Date: 4/9/2010 2:08:00 PM
    Love the contrast in this wonderful write.

  1. Date: 4/9/2010 2:05:00 PM
    Great write in this Haiku. If for the contest should do well...Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara