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Fleeting Rain

Flavor of rain herbal.....clear like broth lingering on the lips ,enticing the tongue to sip its limey brew-- relishing the texture as its vapor titillates one's senses---filling the lungs with air-- And for a moment time stands still for a monsoon glide as the hail seeps inside the bones reminding me how sorrow can be fleeting like the swift movement of raindrops in a rush. Rain Contest Aug 13, 2016

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Date: 10/9/2016 10:32:00 AM
Gorgeous writing! Truly outstanding!
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Date: 8/21/2016 6:08:00 AM
a well-deserved win, lyva.. my best congrats and thanks for your comments...huggs
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Date: 8/15/2016 11:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Lyva!
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Date: 8/15/2016 5:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Lyva ! Hug Eve
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Date: 8/15/2016 4:56:00 PM
Lyva, congrats on your placement in the Rain contest :)-luloo
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Date: 8/15/2016 2:41:00 PM
i like how you incorporated the senses to portray the rain... lyva, really a grand work; thanks for your feedback.. huggs
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Date: 8/13/2016 12:33:00 PM
You most certainly have a talent for imparting flavour into your poetry...Nicely done, Lyva. My best regards. :) john
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Date: 8/13/2016 7:29:00 AM
A great small poem. Good luck in the contest
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