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Flawless You

Flawless you Flawless you? Then you must be the zeal God That bequeaths fourteen: saves seven above And seven below for plow by world’s lords. Lots God drops, and keeps loads up for world’s love; Despite folklore raise on legendary glove You keep pouring bliss, the bounteous you- The God of man, dove, sea and all that’s true. Flawless you, must be the celestial God- The ray of hope that dazzles cuts above And the never frazzled in the storm clouds. Sonorous you descend from heavens of love Are gift every wish ever have, and drove, Every wish should bow and bequeath as due Whence lots live though believe less in you. A.O 16/2/2014

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Date: 3/29/2014 5:38:00 AM
Well constructed and penned poem. Congrats on a fine win,
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Date: 3/29/2014 1:14:00 AM
Abdulhafeez, Congratulations! Thank you for the support. Enjoy my latest blog if you like. It's called "Lunatics On The Loose." Stay tuned, I'll have a new contest coming up in a few days. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/16/2014 11:49:00 AM
This is great Oyewole, I'm proud of you. Eko o ni ba je.
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 2/17/2014 1:53:00 AM
Naijiria lapapo o ni baje and ilu eni kokan wa lada yari o ni baje o. Thanks bro for dropping by.

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