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Flawed Theory

Believing the Universe was built from an explosion, and without plan, a thousand times more foolish than believing you could build a library of fine literature by exploding words into the air. Won a 2nd place

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Date: 8/8/2011 11:52:00 PM
Oh wow joyce this is real true and good. Many congrats for this win.
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Date: 8/8/2011 7:53:00 PM
Smile, quite Good Joyce, especially that last line, Thanks for your support of my contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/8/2011 4:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Sayings Of Wisdom" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/8/2011 1:13:00 PM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of John,Joyce
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Date: 8/8/2011 4:35:00 AM
Truer words were never spoken. I totally agree. Congrats on your win. God Bless, JB
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Date: 8/8/2011 3:19:00 AM
hey Joyce, congrats on your win ,David
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Date: 8/8/2011 12:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your second place win
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Date: 8/8/2011 12:14:00 AM
congrats on your awesome win, joyce..so deep! :) hugggs, nette
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Date: 8/7/2011 11:03:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Joyce. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 8/7/2011 9:49:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your second place win with these great words of wisdom for the contest my friend.. superb..
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Date: 8/6/2011 8:53:00 PM
There may have been a "big bang," Joyce, but there was DEFINITELY a plan by our Creator. Love the analogy of the library blowing up words into the air. After reading your other poems for the "reader's thoughts" contest, I am laughing at this comparison. So true! And people don't seem to realize we don't always get the meaning of what they're saying -- if they ARE saying something. Call me message driven, but this is a great commentary and I agree. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/4/2011 12:45:00 AM
Well penned, well said, and very true Joyce... I luv it!!!!!!
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Date: 8/3/2011 10:02:00 PM
truth be told Joyce ..u penned it perfectly for the contest .. wise words and great title ..good luck ..luv..
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Date: 8/3/2011 6:17:00 PM
So true..So true....
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Date: 8/3/2011 4:55:00 PM
Excellent write and so very true....with love...old Jack
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Date: 8/3/2011 4:50:00 PM
one of the best poem I think I've ever read on poetry soup...if not the best - Kyle
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Date: 8/3/2011 4:44:00 PM
now this makes you think. and that is why it is good writing and i like it, because it is memorable.
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