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Flame Has Now Gone Out

A flame once burned Deep within my soul Love we both yearned Now I am no longer whole God took that flame away Left me alone to slowly die What a price I have to pay For loving, now I live a lie Why take one life When two were entwined Was to become his wife Why leave me behind Now I walk alone Write poetry and paint Sad and so forlorn Now living in restraint. Live in life’s shadow Sun I am without Heart is full of sorrow Flame has now gone out. Seren Roberts 26/11/2012

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Date: 11/27/2012 4:46:00 PM
I don't think I've ever read any of your poems, but I'm glad I read this one. It is beautiful and sad. It hits too close to home. Thanks for the visit and smile - Jesus loves us. Lucilla
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Date: 11/27/2012 7:22:00 PM
Hello Lucilla, thanks for stopping by and reading one of my poems, dont be a stranger. .....Seren
Date: 11/26/2012 12:08:00 PM
Hi Seren so sad because its true but you are not alone and you never will be as David says. You are too sassy for that girl. You tackled this beautifully xx
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Date: 11/26/2012 12:25:00 PM
Thanks Mandy. Is that my new name sassy seren. Lol.
Date: 11/26/2012 8:31:00 AM
Seren believe me you will never walk alone...David
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Date: 11/26/2012 12:27:00 PM
Thank you David ....Seren
Date: 11/26/2012 3:15:00 AM
Wow Seren, this is both wonderful and heartbreaking, yet the strength is there, from a love so strong to create this awesome poem...
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Date: 11/26/2012 4:08:00 AM
Thanks Harry......Seren
Date: 11/25/2012 9:11:00 PM
Such a sad poem. But your poems are beautiful.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/25/2012 9:15:00 PM
Thank you Jon . Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment.....Seren

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