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Flakes Pure Yet of Despair

FLAKES PURE YET OF DESPAIR Cool feather like flakes stream falling, falling from cracking skies bosom shell skirt like white gown lace light. Swinging quiet and slow in cozy air ~ painting wonder on bored ground. Isn't it a lovely show? Atmosphere's icy blotting blanket sings chimes so sweet that couples sway. Snowflakes spell magic flair. A beauty appearing so chaste and pure yet, hidden song of despair to buds, trees, fields and birds... (c)olive eloisa 2:35 am July 08, 2014

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Faye Gibson

Date: 8/19/2014 8:17:00 PM

Olive, pretty, light and lovely poem. Beautiful imagery. Congratulations.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/30/2014 2:53:00 AM

thanks much FAye.. :)!

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 8/18/2014 4:25:00 PM

this is quite an unusual one with some beautiful imagery; the more I read of your work, the more I like it - congrats on your win! :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/19/2014 8:46:00 AM

Thanks much Charlotte.. :) i appreciate it.. :) GBU

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/18/2014 5:31:00 AM

Charming and lovely imagery, Olive, congrats on the win

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/18/2014 1:39:00 AM

you are on a roll and I'm not surprised, eloi... applause to you!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/30/2014 2:52:00 AM

thanks much Nette,, :) Happy new year.. :)!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/17/2014 10:19:00 PM

Olive, Congratulations, in Andrea's sorta Shell, contest:)....Love Linda

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/30/2014 2:09:00 AM

thanks much LOlly Linda.. :)hugs.. :D

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/17/2014 5:33:00 PM

this is pretty pretty pretty!!! Such a charming poem, sweetie pie! (typo in line 6). I really enjoyed finding this gem among the contest entries. Congratulations in my contest.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/19/2014 8:47:00 AM

thanks much ANdie.. :D GBU

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/17/2014 2:23:00 PM

No worries the trees and flowers just nap! Congrad's on Your win!! Light & Love

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 8/8/2014 8:41:00 AM

Love your voice, Olive. Good luck in the contest. This has incredible imagery and transports the reader to a place I recognize. ;) Cheers from Canada

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/10/2014 5:02:00 AM

:) thank you so much Cyndi :) i really appreciate your comment. :) GBU

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/8/2014 6:37:00 AM

A lovely poem on flakes, love it, Olive.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/10/2014 4:50:00 AM

Thanks so much Dr. Ram. :) I appreciate it. :)

Keith Merritt

Date: 8/7/2014 5:38:00 PM

A more gentle soul was never expressed with such mystery and tenderness. Nothing flakey here, dear Olive ! This is a great poem !

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/10/2014 2:23:00 AM

Thank you very much Keith for your tender comment..:) I appreciate it so much..:) GBU

Paul Callus

Date: 8/7/2014 2:32:00 PM

Falling snow must be quite a lovely, magical sight for those who, like me, do not experience it (except on films and postcards). You have painted it with magic and flair. In the meantime you also look at the other side of the picture....you're no egoist:) (of course, after winter spring comes....) Wel done Olive_eloi. gl and take care. // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/9/2014 3:57:00 AM

Thanks much Paul..:)

Tim Smith

Date: 8/7/2014 2:15:00 PM

Love the magic you portrayed stunning visions from a stunning vision...hugs Tim

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/9/2014 2:31:00 AM

Thank you so much Tim for dropping by..:) GBU

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/7/2014 1:45:00 PM

Isn't it a lovely show? Yes it most definitely is! Oh Beautiful Olive, :) :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/7/2014 7:09:00 PM

Thanks so much dear Cassie..:) sorry I get delayed replying..:( really I have been busy..:( hope to cope up