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Fixing Flaws

God blesses my soul. Completely, eternally— Fixing up my flaws. © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen February 22, 2010 Poetic form: Haiku

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Date: 2/23/2010 6:59:00 AM
Nice cinquain, sweetie!
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Date: 2/22/2010 3:32:00 PM
the same here. john
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Date: 2/22/2010 3:18:00 PM
From what I've seen, His work with you has been completed, Dane Ann! Great cinquain, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/22/2010 3:14:00 PM
nicely penned, yep he is working on me.
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Date: 2/22/2010 2:13:00 PM
excellent choice of words, the beauty of haiku, insightful and beautiful
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