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Life's containing orb vacuum's floating jewel : probes the depth of mind

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Date: 7/9/2014 8:28:00 PM

OOh great Haiku, grats on making it to the winners list with this beaut:)

Date: 7/8/2014 11:24:00 PM

Nice win Dan... Linda

Date: 7/8/2014 8:48:00 PM

Love the thoughts here, Dan my friend. Congrats on a great win.. Hugs... Arlene

Date: 7/8/2014 5:52:00 PM

Very good. Congratulations on your win.

Date: 7/8/2014 3:56:00 PM

great thoughts!! Congrats for your win.

Date: 7/8/2014 1:21:00 PM

Congratulations, Dan. excellent probing haiku! // paul

Date: 7/8/2014 2:31:00 AM

Dan it's awesome ! Well penned ! Congrats on win!

Date: 7/8/2014 12:39:00 AM

Awesome meaningful write, Dan. congrats on the win

Date: 7/8/2014 12:10:00 AM

Hi Dan, congratulations on a beautiful win! Well-deserved!

Date: 7/7/2014 9:17:00 PM

Dan, Congratulations, Thank you for the awesome haiku. Enjoy my -Most Recent Blog Post if you like. ""Super Blind - Super Quick..."" Love SKAT

Date: 5/25/2014 1:04:00 PM

- Great haiku, Dan ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)