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Precious gift bestowed upon us by Lord , is mother nature, the philanthropist Who happily takes care of her wards and shows mercy to her inhabitants The Sun shines in morning to wake us up Stars and moon illuminate the night sky Birds chirp melodious songs to cheer up Because of her grace,we boast ecstasy She will never give us burden or pain She grants us the imperishable love Even dark clouds across the sky bring rain , the rationale behind graceful rainbow But poor men incognizant of her worth Trying to ruin the heavenly earth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/27/2016 2:54:00 PM
congrats on your 50th poem. I remember my excitement on reaching my 100th sonnet and how I did a sonnet ABOUT the 100th sonnet!! This was very lovely, Supraja.
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 9/28/2016 4:07:00 AM
Thank you so much for stopping by Andrea...Glad to know about your 100th sonnet... Its really a very tough form to write but you are amazing...
Date: 9/27/2016 9:10:00 AM
Supraja, This is so nice. U penned every line perfect. Enjoyed..........// Manmath
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 9/27/2016 9:50:00 AM
Thank you so much for stopping by...Glad you enjoyed it...
Date: 9/27/2016 8:25:00 AM
The ingratitude shown by humans to our mother earth is monumental! For how long would our mother sustain us when we commit matricide? Excellent inspiring writing with a clear message to us unfeeling humans! Good luck dear Supraja! God bless you and your efforts!
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Keith Logan
Date: 9/27/2016 11:09:00 AM
Hello Demetrios, I have no idea how my comment for Supraja wound up in your area but I do agree completely with what you say about Mother Earth.
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 9/27/2016 8:51:00 AM
Thank you so much for stopping by..Glad you liked it...
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Keith Logan
Date: 9/27/2016 8:26:00 AM
By the way, I should have mentioned, for a first effort this is very good.
Date: 9/27/2016 8:24:00 AM
I'm sorry but to me kids are always young goats. Precious gift bestowed on us by God , is Mother Nature, the philanthropist, who happily takes care of her children and shows mercy to her inhabitants
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 9/27/2016 8:50:00 AM
Thank you so much for pointing out my mistakes...I will change it...

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